Saturday, October 13, 2012
graff 2 contrast
My step mom Michele is very family oriented. She has a big issue on being a family. If you dont want to be part of it she wont try either. My mom Mary Jane only wants to be with you if it will benefit her. The only time she says family is when someone is hurt and will get her some attention. Michele will help family and spend time with them and get to know them. Mary Jane on the other hand wants to know whats in your bank and what she can get. At lease i know why i want family.
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"My step mom Michele is very family oriented. She has a big issue on being a family. If you dont want to be part of it she wont try either. Michele will help family and spend time with them and get to know them. Mary Jane on the other hand wants to know whats in your bank and what she can get. My mom Mary Jane only wants to be with you if it will benefit her. The only time she says family is when someone is hurt and will get her some attention.At lease i know why i want family."
ReplyDeleteMight be neater if you keep all the Michele material at one end of the graf, MJ at the other.
I like the way you move from one to the other with 'on the other hand.' Good outline for a graf but this material has to be pushed harder with some examples or stories from your experience with each woman.